Well, I’m up to page 10 on the Albert Whitman book, so I think this beginning is going to stand. At least for this draft. It’s usually around page 5 that I conk out if I’m going to. But I’m excited about this beginning, so I think it’s finally the right one.
I’ve also got a working title: The Truth About T.M.S.
The third time IS the charm!
Great! So what does TMS stand for? I have this jaw problem called TMJ…but doubt that’s it (g). (Too Much Sex? Now that would be an interesting problem…but I digress…)
Truman Middle School. Very…uh (dare I say it?) anti-climactic after your suggestion. But this is a middle grade, not a YA. I’ve never heard of TMJ?
TMJ is a problem with my jaw shifting out of place, and for some people it can be painful. For me it’s hardly noticiable.
I think your book sounds great! Can’t wait to read it. LJS
I’m glad your manuscript is coming along well!
Yay for you!! Go! Go! Go!
hope it is a marvelous weekend for you! 🙂